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Offline margia

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"LIFE"
« on: May 01, 2010, 10:29:27 PM »
“Life”

Life is so soft...
Life is so hard...
Life is beautiful...
Life is also painful...

Life makes me smile...
Life makes me cry...
Life gives love...
Life takes love...

Life is you...
Life is me...
Life is short when I want to live...
Life is long when I lost your ‘love’……..


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Re: "LIFE"
« Reply #1 on: May 01, 2010, 11:01:35 PM »
thanks for nice poem.
Syed Mizanur Rahman
Head, Department of Journalism and Mass Communication
Director of Students' Affairs, DIU

Offline Shamim Ansary

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Re: "LIFE"
« Reply #2 on: May 06, 2010, 05:14:38 PM »
I did not know Margia, you can write such a splendid poem...!!
Fabulous poem, written in plain diction.
The thought is transparent.
Carry on.
Awaiting your next poem.

Ansary, MA student, English.
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"Many thanks to Allah who gave us life after having given us death and (our) final return (on the Day of Qiyaamah (Judgement)) is to Him"

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Re: "LIFE"
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2010, 04:20:11 PM »

Life is short when I want to live...
Life is long when I lost your ‘love’……..






Its a true realization, i must say.....
Md. Kumrul Hasan
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Re: "LIFE"
« Reply #4 on: May 08, 2010, 02:09:11 PM »
wow Margia!!!

Keep on, write more, post more...

UKmam

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« Reply #5 on: May 08, 2010, 10:26:55 PM »
wow dost,
liked the poem very much...
specially the last two lines...
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simple, but true...
...keep writing...

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Re: "LIFE"
« Reply #6 on: May 08, 2010, 11:55:08 PM »
Thank you Ma'am for considering my poem!!!
Thank you Ansari vai for your nice comment on my poem!!!
Thank you Raju vaia,Hasan and Jilani!!!
I will try my best for writing again a poem!!!
 You all are my inspiration!!!