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Offline Shahrear

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RAIN
« on: May 05, 2010, 11:55:55 PM »
Rain

Hey! Can you hear the sound?
The sweet soft sound of rain.
Makes a rhythm, goes on,
Drop! Another drop and many drops!
Gives you a tone, makes you desire
Feel it ,  this is now her life
She cries like the rain. The sound
Is sweet but she is in pain
Lost love makes her so.
I am a coil goes round in her head
She asked for love, I said no!
She is in me, I feel; laying in bed, alone
But I contemplate: I will touch the zenith of glory,
This tyrannic decision is made
So, I let her raining.


MD. Hasan Shahrear

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Re: RAIN
« Reply #1 on: May 06, 2010, 03:58:26 PM »
Nice poem Shahrear. It seems, the poem is written for me---- the thoughts are mine, and the presentation is your!

I love rain. I like to be flashed away by rain.
"Many thanks to Allah who gave us life after having given us death and (our) final return (on the Day of Qiyaamah (Judgement)) is to Him"

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Re: RAIN
« Reply #2 on: May 06, 2010, 06:12:40 PM »
Thanx

Brother, Hope you a rainy life.

Take Care

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Re: RAIN
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2010, 04:15:34 PM »
What a reality Hasan has depicted. Love the innocent emotion is failed to the harsh reality. I vow Mr. Hasan for his real observation of the present lives around us where 'rain' has become peoples tears only because of 'tyrannic' reality (to achieve the earthly possession).


I appreciate this sort of depiction, though some people take the meaning in another way!
Md. Kumrul Hasan
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Re: RAIN
« Reply #4 on: May 09, 2010, 02:25:42 AM »
Kumrul,

Thank you for the compliment; yes life is not so easy in this rock solid world. Your poetic genius is reflected in the appreciation of Rain.

Best Wishes.