A poem to start with

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Offline bbhaque

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A poem to start with
« on: November 29, 2015, 10:43:17 AM »
Magic Map
Dr. Bipasha Binte Haque

In a perforated magic map
She sees all
In all the potholes
Grows gardens of Eden
Mystic, alluring


Standing behind a perforated curtain
She sees all
Sees the rest of the world
Mystic, challenging

How many potholes
Are there
In the magic map: she knows
Each hole testifies to chastise her

Between inverted commas
And parentheses
They make a nest
A cozy nest

Under the nest
Lies perforated magic map

They see all

(11.9.07)

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Re: A poem to start with
« Reply #1 on: November 29, 2015, 11:14:03 AM »
Wow! Bipasha'pa, I didn't know that you are so poetic! I could actually visualize the setting of the poem...Beautifully constructed!
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Offline Afroza Akhter Tina

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Re: A poem to start with
« Reply #2 on: November 29, 2015, 11:43:02 AM »
Wonderful poem Ma'am...something different!



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Re: A poem to start with
« Reply #3 on: November 30, 2015, 10:05:07 AM »
Thank you very much for appreciating it. I am encouraged a lot :) :).

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Re: A poem to start with
« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2016, 04:33:47 PM »
It's always wonderful to feel appreciated.
So here's my chance to say it!
Thank you for such a superb poem.

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Re: A poem to start with
« Reply #5 on: March 15, 2016, 03:21:04 PM »
so poetic..
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Re: A poem to start with
« Reply #6 on: April 26, 2016, 09:25:44 AM »
'Each hole testifies to chastise her'***

mystic , smoothly woven and 'cozy'. Wonderful!

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Re: A poem to start with
« Reply #7 on: May 15, 2016, 12:14:27 PM »
Dear all, I'n so happy that you enjoyed my poem. ;D ;D ;D