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Offline cmkhasan

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Colour (a poem)
« on: August 28, 2009, 01:14:30 AM »
Colour
Md. Kumrul Hasan

There’s I saw red brush among the green
White and yellow makes a pattern
What I was thinking
Nothing but the painter

There’s I saw lazy colour mix in the up
Windy animated show
Vivid and vibrant
Loving and lovely
There’s the beauty
I found I am not anything but a mixture of colour

My eyes were enchanted
Blindness came afterwards
The show was not over
I opened the lips of the eyes
And they wanted to be delighted.
« Last Edit: September 10, 2009, 03:42:44 PM by cmkhasan »
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Re: Colour (a poem)
« Reply #1 on: August 29, 2009, 12:31:44 PM »
wow Kamrul! Nice poem.

I would be very happy if you continue sharing.

Uk madam

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Re: Colour (a poem)
« Reply #2 on: August 30, 2009, 12:54:05 AM »
A true subjective poem which provides the colour of life and reminds 'Cogito Ergo Sum'(I think therefore i am, Descartes).

Let us make a world which can provide delight for eyes.

Thanks for your poem Kumrul.

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Re: Colour (a poem)
« Reply #3 on: September 09, 2009, 12:57:31 AM »
@ Umme Kulsum Mam

I am really glad to have your positive opinion regarding my participation in the forum.
I will try to keep myself updating with the forum. I hope you will give us feedback
by testifying our writings, information and presence.
Md. Kumrul Hasan
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Re: Colour (a poem)
« Reply #4 on: September 09, 2009, 01:05:19 AM »
@ Hasan Shahrear


Your hawk eyed deep analysis is inspiring to me. Your invitation 'to make a delightful world’ is really made me happy. I am expecting that we can work together to have the desired world.
Md. Kumrul Hasan
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Re: Colour (a poem)
« Reply #5 on: April 01, 2010, 05:02:12 PM »
nice poem...

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Re: Colour (a poem)
« Reply #6 on: April 13, 2010, 01:59:43 PM »
A stimulating poem. I just love the colourful use of colour in your poem.The colour adds  colours to your poem.Wonderful. 

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Re: Colour (a poem)
« Reply #7 on: August 09, 2010, 10:01:32 PM »
Thank you Mam.
I love to see your feelings here. Hoping you always colourful.
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Re: Colour (a poem)
« Reply #8 on: September 20, 2010, 12:36:19 AM »
great poem  carry on  continue

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« Reply #9 on: September 20, 2010, 11:47:21 AM »
wow...... its heart touching.
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