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Offline Shahrear

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Do It
« on: August 30, 2009, 12:39:03 AM »
 Take a look at this poem and let me know your feedback.

Do It
Hasan Shahrear

Yes you! Come on, move forward
Don’t make glorious retreat, never,
Because you know you can do it.

No human born without woman womb
Crawled and walked; now running.
None is holding your tongue
Some just ignore, some don’t know how to do it.

Life is life itself, unique,
Don’t think to be or not to be.
Memory Napoleon and Che
And make your heart and brain parallel
And lets do it.


« Last Edit: August 30, 2009, 12:41:22 AM by Shahrear »

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Re: Do It
« Reply #1 on: August 30, 2009, 10:28:11 AM »
Dear Shahrear,

I smell little bit of ''Ulysses" in it. The  poem inspires to be positive towards life.I think you can think about the word "Memory"....any other word!the overall message of the poem is appreciable, use of brain and mind together.

How nice to read your poems! keep the spirit up. Plz inform more students to join the forum.


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Re: Do It
« Reply #2 on: September 09, 2009, 01:11:11 AM »
Poems have many characteristics. Shahrear, yours one explores 'encourage'. This is really a good attempt, I am hoping that you will share your more 'attempt'.
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Re: Do It
« Reply #3 on: April 12, 2010, 02:52:09 PM »
Dear Shahrear, i found the poem very inspiring. r u suggesting  we shouldn't make overwhelming promises that we can't fulfill? we must not try to  cross the human limitations? But we must dream and to make it real should work with a
high hope.

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Re: Do It
« Reply #4 on: May 09, 2010, 02:52:52 PM »
What about your present state of writing poems? You were busy with short story writing, I know. We want to relish your new poems in the Forum, as we know, you are a good kind of poet.
"Many thanks to Allah who gave us life after having given us death and (our) final return (on the Day of Qiyaamah (Judgement)) is to Him"

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Re: Do It
« Reply #5 on: May 12, 2010, 03:04:47 AM »
You all inspire my writings.

I am proud to have a such great critics.

Best Wishes.

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« Reply #6 on: May 12, 2010, 09:31:15 AM »
Yes, "Do It" Shahrear....
"Many thanks to Allah who gave us life after having given us death and (our) final return (on the Day of Qiyaamah (Judgement)) is to Him"

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Re: Do It
« Reply #7 on: May 24, 2010, 07:18:26 PM »
obviously 'Do It' and carry on.......

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Re: Do It
« Reply #8 on: May 26, 2010, 02:47:29 PM »
yeas this is effective things for development in myself
really thanks
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