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Faculty of Humanities and Social Science => English => Topic started by: margia on May 01, 2010, 10:29:27 PM

Title: "LIFE"
Post by: margia on May 01, 2010, 10:29:27 PM

“Life”

Life is so soft...
Life is so hard...
Life is beautiful...
Life is also painful...

Life makes me smile...
Life makes me cry...
Life gives love...
Life takes love...

Life is you...
Life is me...
Life is short when I want to live...
Life is long when I lost your ‘love’……..

Title: Re: "LIFE"
Post by: raju on May 01, 2010, 11:01:35 PM

thanks for nice poem.

Title: Re: "LIFE"
Post by: Shamim Ansary on May 06, 2010, 05:14:38 PM

I did not know Margia, you can write such a splendid poem...!!
Fabulous poem, written in plain diction.
The thought is transparent.
Carry on.
Awaiting your next poem.

Ansary, MA student, English.
Admin., DIU

Title: Re: "LIFE"
Post by: cmkhasan on May 07, 2010, 04:20:11 PM

Life is short when I want to live...
Life is long when I lost your ‘love’……..





Its a true realization, i must say.....

Title: Re: "LIFE"
Post by: kulsum on May 08, 2010, 02:09:11 PM

wow Margia!!!

Keep on, write more, post more...

UKmam

Title: Re: "LIFE"
Post by: mszilani on May 08, 2010, 10:26:55 PM

wow dost,
liked the poem very much...
specially the last two lines...
...
simple, but true...
...keep writing...

Title: Re: "LIFE"
Post by: margia on May 08, 2010, 11:55:08 PM

Thank you Ma'am for considering my poem!!!
Thank you Ansari vai for your nice comment on my poem!!!
Thank you Raju vaia,Hasan and Jilani!!!
I will try my best for writing again a poem!!!
 You all are my inspiration!!!