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« on: August 14, 2014, 10:10:13 PM »
Review of the story of “Rose”
Submitted by Group B
Md. Shariful Islam (133-22-290)
Sarmin Sultana (133-22-291)
Razia Sultana (133-22-289)
Aniqa Akhter (133-22-287)
The title of the story is “the title of the story of Rose” is appropriate because Rose is the main character of the story and it is a story of her life. Main theme of the story is man dominating society, emancipation of woman and a strong mentality of a confident woman. Jack represents the male dominate society who is unable to thinking equality of his wife role in the family. On the other hand Rose represents the confident and strong personality. She is not broken heart when she fallen any crises. She struggle in the difficulties of the society and save herself. She is aware of her individuality and believes in woman’s freedom. It is a story of Rose who is an orphan. She fallen love with a rich man Jack and marry him. Although she is devoted towards her husband try to solve his problem but her husband think she is not equal like him and did not share anything with her. He leaves her alone in Australia. In this crucial moment of the life Rose stand up with strong mentality. She able to stand her own feet but for a work permit she decide to does a fake marriage with George. In the mean time Jack back the country and aware about the entire incident. After some misunderstandings he able to understand depth of Rose’s love for him. Then they start a new life. Total number of character is seven in three major characters Jack, Rose and George one minor character is Marie. Rose is the central character of the story. She is the protagonist also. Although she is a orphan girl but she has confident and strong mentality. She is a round character. When she fallen any crisis she does not know what to do but because of her strong mentality and confident she solve her problem. She is devoted towards her husband. George is another major character of the story. He is co-worker and friend of Rose who secretly love her. He helped her when she fall any problem in a work place. When he aware about Rose and jack’s misunderstanding because of him he solves their problem and sacrifices his love for their happy conjugal life. He is a round character. Rose’s husband Jack another important character of the story. Although their marriage is a love marriage but he cannot think Rose is equal like him. He represent male dominate mentality. He does not share his problem and thoughts with rose. But at the last part of the story he able to change his mentality and leave Melbourne to start a new life with Rose. Marie is a minor character. She is a good friend of Rose and help her when she fallen crisis. Mr. and Mrs. smith both are minor character, they have no any significance role in this story. The story has been taken place in Melbourne, Australia especially in the airport. Because in the airport, Jack leaves Rose alone, Jack leaves Rose alone, Rose work at the airport’s shop and in the same place they leaves Melbourne to short their new life. The way of narration is third person singular nimber. Steve is another minor character of “the title of the story of Rose”. He is a friend of Jack. He has a phone call in the first part of the story. Without the phone call he have no role in this story.
In this story both formal and informal languages are used. Informal languages are used for day to day conversation between the characters. Two informal words are found- ‘guy’ and ‘yeah’. Replaced these two words it is better to use ‘person’ and ‘yes’.
Day to day conversation is present through dialogues in this story. The dialogues are appropriate.
It is the story with happy ending. The climax of the story is when Jack knows about the fake marriage of Rose and George. A few symbols like lifeless, crossroads, fresh, innocent beauty are used in this story.
It is a normal social story. Although Rose tried to establish herself in the society but at the last point she accepted Jack’s domination over her who leaved her all alone one day. She sacrificed her career and leaved Melbourne to start a new life with Jack. Happiness comes with sacrifice of Rose.
Submitted by Group B
Md. Shariful Islam (133-22-290)
Sarmin Sultana (133-22-291)
Razia Sultana (133-22-289)
Aniqa Akhter (133-22-287)
The title of the story is “the title of the story of Rose” is appropriate because Rose is the main character of the story and it is a story of her life. Main theme of the story is man dominating society, emancipation of woman and a strong mentality of a confident woman. Jack represents the male dominate society who is unable to thinking equality of his wife role in the family. On the other hand Rose represents the confident and strong personality. She is not broken heart when she fallen any crises. She struggle in the difficulties of the society and save herself. She is aware of her individuality and believes in woman’s freedom. It is a story of Rose who is an orphan. She fallen love with a rich man Jack and marry him. Although she is devoted towards her husband try to solve his problem but her husband think she is not equal like him and did not share anything with her. He leaves her alone in Australia. In this crucial moment of the life Rose stand up with strong mentality. She able to stand her own feet but for a work permit she decide to does a fake marriage with George. In the mean time Jack back the country and aware about the entire incident. After some misunderstandings he able to understand depth of Rose’s love for him. Then they start a new life. Total number of character is seven in three major characters Jack, Rose and George one minor character is Marie. Rose is the central character of the story. She is the protagonist also. Although she is a orphan girl but she has confident and strong mentality. She is a round character. When she fallen any crisis she does not know what to do but because of her strong mentality and confident she solve her problem. She is devoted towards her husband. George is another major character of the story. He is co-worker and friend of Rose who secretly love her. He helped her when she fall any problem in a work place. When he aware about Rose and jack’s misunderstanding because of him he solves their problem and sacrifices his love for their happy conjugal life. He is a round character. Rose’s husband Jack another important character of the story. Although their marriage is a love marriage but he cannot think Rose is equal like him. He represent male dominate mentality. He does not share his problem and thoughts with rose. But at the last part of the story he able to change his mentality and leave Melbourne to start a new life with Rose. Marie is a minor character. She is a good friend of Rose and help her when she fallen crisis. Mr. and Mrs. smith both are minor character, they have no any significance role in this story. The story has been taken place in Melbourne, Australia especially in the airport. Because in the airport, Jack leaves Rose alone, Jack leaves Rose alone, Rose work at the airport’s shop and in the same place they leaves Melbourne to short their new life. The way of narration is third person singular nimber. Steve is another minor character of “the title of the story of Rose”. He is a friend of Jack. He has a phone call in the first part of the story. Without the phone call he have no role in this story.
In this story both formal and informal languages are used. Informal languages are used for day to day conversation between the characters. Two informal words are found- ‘guy’ and ‘yeah’. Replaced these two words it is better to use ‘person’ and ‘yes’.
Day to day conversation is present through dialogues in this story. The dialogues are appropriate.
It is the story with happy ending. The climax of the story is when Jack knows about the fake marriage of Rose and George. A few symbols like lifeless, crossroads, fresh, innocent beauty are used in this story.
It is a normal social story. Although Rose tried to establish herself in the society but at the last point she accepted Jack’s domination over her who leaved her all alone one day. She sacrificed her career and leaved Melbourne to start a new life with Jack. Happiness comes with sacrifice of Rose.