Daffodil International University
Faculty of Humanities and Social Science => English => Topic started by: bidita on March 19, 2011, 05:32:21 PM
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Blank emotion
I am blank
Feel me at once
I am Blank
Touch me at a glance
I am blank
Give me heaven from the sky
I am blank
A little girl smiles with shy.
I am blank
Take me and spread your wings
I am blank
Go through your confidence with happy things.
I am blank
No one knows
I am blank
It just begins to you to show.....
BIDITA
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:)Nicely written, Bidita Apu,
A "Blank" has its own history.And I guess you've tried to give the feelings of that history........
Really nice............!!!
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Bidita...in one word..'wonderful'!
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Thank you Maam ..Please read those I wrote it yesterday
Indescribable Emotion
Painless heart achieve the death soul
Surviving life just reacting my dreams
Remarkable movements waiting for a chance
by cleaning dirty cloud around my sky..
Frustration is melting in my eyes
drinking happiness by one drop of darkness
blowing wind just touch of my hand
I just slap of my emotions crossing the fake world.
My mind plays gambling with my unknown future
killing sentiment for winning awhile
life becomes mysteries in my shuttering mind
gloomy nature could not alive for your
DESTRUCTIVE LOVE...
BIDITA
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Well selected dictions
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Bidita,
You have a very good hand in poetry. Keep it up! We wanna see a sequel of emotion.
Best wishes.
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Must Happen
Everyone finds there soul of death
it is feeling full of faith
Suspense can never die with holy sky
innocent Love will win awhile
Slighter touch can give you freedom mind
discriminatory help to send you a hidden place,
there will your punishment so
Ego should not work on that day
it will be only silence nothing to say .....
___BIDITA____
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Blood-tie is uncertain
have to maintain it thoroughly
Life creates some weakness
imperfection is not something false...
Future will tell the destructive past
irrelevant reality cannot sit calm
disbelievers are shocked of your less protection
sparkling emotion could not absorb fast
Unnecessary goals setting on mind
Innocent mind reminds it awhile
unemotional blind eyes calling me
Where I can go to find softness mind...
___BIDITA___
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"Here you are.
You are, I know you.
And
Here am I,
Who you know well.
Again we dwell in form together,
And I'm beginning to Remember
As I watch you shine,
And project your wondrous magic show
Upon this place and time."
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In DIU there are many poets. Teacher, student both. And i am proud to be a student of DIU. :D
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Wow Bidita apu. Carry on.................
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Its really appreciable for u Bidita.I hope in future u will be a great poet of Bangladesh whose writing reflect our life,problems,tragedy,realty,hope,..and so many real life imagery. I wish ur Great success in ur poetry writing and hope 1day ur poem can be added in my Film scene,If i can make myself as a good maker haha :D.May Allah bless us all -Ameen. :)
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Thank you everyone Specially Raihan. First of all welcome to our Forum Family. Wish you a inspirational thumps up to you. Your participation will be more effective for us. Be with us.
Warmly
BIDITA
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Your writing hand is wonderful. carry on this process...........
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Seeking some orchestra
need some musical turn;
no more selective abs
rain drops touching
ma innocent heart.
I feel the, the dark room
with my sinking lonely ships!
Gloomy leafs turns me there, forever....
----Bidita Rahman
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Really wonderful.
Antara Basak
Lecturer
Dept. of English
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Pretty Emotion teaches
plucking some beautiful
feelings in past dream
may be it will fix up
my violin stein.
Forgetting some words
in my old hidden diary
and seeking some twinkling
smiles, flies in my memories......
____Bidita Rahman