Hopes....Poem

[bidita]

                                                        Hopes
                     
                                                Life is full of hardship
                                                      but not much
                                                            as our desire...

                                                Life is full of fights
                                                      but not much
                                                            as our strength

                                                Life is full of neglects
                                                      but not much
                                                            as our love...
                                           
                                                Life is full of sorrows
                                                     but not much
                                                            as our hopes....

[Shamim Ansary]

Life is full of nice Poems
   but not as much          
    as this one...

[irina]

You remember the old adage 'Hope springs eternal'? The nice little poem has a musical note and makes me think of interesting subjects. Hope you will write more.

[kulsum]

Bidita!!!

wow....

Beautiful lyric. Read in Gantha.

Uk mam

[cmkhasan]

An optimistic presentation of life is depicted here with rhythm. I really enjoy the poem much because my recent readings are full of pessimism, sorrowfulness, and, hardship of positive attitude towards life and ongoing events. I appreciate your writings.

[asma alam]

Dear cmkhasan,

it sounds very rhythmic and full of optimism. It's really a nice poem!!!

[suraiya]

It's really a very nice poem.

[mhrasel]

A good poem contains the demand of the readers.

[cmkhasan]

Dear Asma Alam Madam,


I think you are to address Bidita instead of cmkhasan because of the poem is belonging to her. Am I right? However, the writing is well constructed.

[shamsi]

Dear Kumrul,

Its good to see you here.Why are you running after pessimism?Is it something relishing?

As your teacher,I always want to see you optimistic.

Bests

Shamsi Miss

[cmkhasan]

Dear Shamsi Madam,

The social life of European in the last century was full of Pessimism, Nihilism, Existential crisis (Sopenhauer, Nietzshe, Kierkegaard, and J P Sarte), absurdity, hopelessness, and so on. Literature of this Period had greatly depicted this social impact on personal life. T S Eliot, James Joyce, D H Lawrence, E M Forster, Samuel Beckett, A Camus, Franz Kafka and many others have illustrated the condition in their great works.

Our cultural life is greatly influenced by the European life, especially the literature of west. As I am belonging to the ongoing generation I am little but a part of this current.


I welcome your suggestion always.
Best wishes

[shaikat]

Super..

[mhrasel]

The poem is really nice.

[shamsi]

Dear Kumrul,

Thanks for your quick and detailed reply.I can see you are inspired by the writers you mentioned.You made me realize that sometimes pessimism can also contribute to our creative faculties.

Bests

Shamsi Miss.