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A Blank Page (a poem)
irina:
Dear Kumrul
My utmost desire and prayer as well to be a page full of hopeful notes. Thanks.
mhrasel:
A poem is a source of mental pleasure sometimes...
suraiya:
a nice poem!
kulsum:
Dear Kamrul,
Yes for yr insistence, i would like to be a bit critical.
The very first stanza...ends with a question but missing a punctuation(?)
The whole Second stanza is without any punctuation and i think it matters more in poetry!
And the last line, is it correct" what do you prayer?"?
There are many qualities of a good poem here, i think if you brush it up more it will come up as a better one. And you also have to remember arrangement of words that really make a poem poetic and differentiate from prose.
Nice effort, lovely theme, good analogy and images....craft it more!! :)
I have got yr prose item cant manage time to read and comment.
Take Care.
Umme kulsum Madam
nature:
Good and nice poem..........thanks
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