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...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« on: March 19, 2011, 05:32:21 PM »
                                     
                          Blank emotion

                                    I am blank
                                          Feel me at once
                                    I am Blank
                                          Touch me at a glance
                                    I am blank
                                          Give me heaven from the sky
                                    I am blank
                                          A little girl smiles with shy.
                                    I am blank
                                         Take me and spread your wings
                                    I am blank
                                         Go through your confidence with happy things.
                                    I am blank
                                         No one knows
                                    I am blank
                                          It just begins to you to show.....





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Bidita Rahman :)
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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #1 on: March 19, 2011, 06:16:44 PM »
 :)Nicely written, Bidita Apu,

A "Blank" has its own history.And I guess you've tried to give the feelings of that history........

Really nice............!!!
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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2011, 04:54:09 PM »
Bidita...in one word..'wonderful'!
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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2011, 08:17:07 PM »
 Thank you Maam ..Please read those I wrote it yesterday
                   
                                  Indescribable Emotion

                                        Painless heart achieve the death soul
                                        Surviving life just reacting my dreams
                                        Remarkable movements waiting for a chance
                                        by cleaning dirty cloud around my sky..

                                        Frustration is melting in my eyes
                                        drinking happiness by one drop of darkness
                                        blowing wind just touch of my hand
                                        I just slap of my emotions crossing the fake world.

                                        My mind plays gambling with my unknown future
                                        killing sentiment for winning awhile
                                        life becomes mysteries in my shuttering mind
                                        gloomy nature could not alive for your   
                                                                               DESTRUCTIVE LOVE...


                                                                                                                       BIDITA
Bidita Rahman :)
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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #4 on: March 22, 2011, 09:31:37 AM »
Well selected dictions
"Many thanks to Allah who gave us life after having given us death and (our) final return (on the Day of Qiyaamah (Judgement)) is to Him"

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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #5 on: March 22, 2011, 04:39:09 PM »
Bidita,

You have a very good hand in poetry. Keep it up! We wanna see a sequel of emotion.

Best wishes.
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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #6 on: March 26, 2011, 11:43:01 AM »

                                          Must Happen
      
                                                      
                                                   Everyone finds there soul of death
                                                                    it is feeling full of faith
                                                    Suspense can never die with holy sky
                                                                innocent Love will win awhile
  
                                                   Slighter touch can give you freedom mind
                                                 discriminatory help to send you a hidden place,
                                                                       there will your  punishment so
                                                      Ego should not work on that day
                                                    it will be only silence nothing to say .....

                                                                                                       ___BIDITA____
Bidita Rahman :)
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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #7 on: March 30, 2011, 09:45:06 AM »


 

                                               Blood-tie is uncertain
                                               have to maintain it thoroughly
                                               Life creates some weakness
                                               imperfection is not something false...

                                               Future will tell the destructive past
                                               irrelevant reality cannot sit calm
                                               disbelievers are shocked of your less protection
                                               sparkling emotion could not absorb fast 
           
                                               Unnecessary goals setting on mind
                                               Innocent mind reminds it awhile
                                               unemotional blind eyes calling me
                                               Where I can go to find softness mind...

                                                                                                   ___BIDITA___
Bidita Rahman :)
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poem of reflection
« Reply #8 on: May 18, 2011, 02:53:37 PM »
"Here you are.
You are, I know you.
And
Here am I,
Who you know well.
Again we dwell in form together,
And I'm beginning to Remember
As I watch you shine,
And project your wondrous magic show
Upon this place and time."

Those who worship the natural elements enter darkness (Air, Water, Fire, etc.). Those who worship sambhuti sink deeper in darkness. [Yajurveda 40:9]; Sambhuti means created things, for example table, chair, idol, etc.

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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #9 on: October 15, 2011, 12:25:02 AM »
In DIU there are many poets. Teacher, student both. And i am proud to be a student of DIU. :D

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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #10 on: October 15, 2011, 10:40:30 AM »
Wow Bidita apu. Carry on.................
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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #11 on: October 21, 2011, 03:30:30 PM »
Its really appreciable for u Bidita.I hope in future u will be a great poet of Bangladesh whose writing reflect our life,problems,tragedy,realty,hope,..and so many real life imagery. I wish ur Great success in ur poetry writing and hope 1day ur poem can be added in my Film scene,If i can make myself as a good maker haha :D.May Allah bless us all -Ameen. :)
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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #12 on: October 21, 2011, 08:31:10 PM »


Thank you everyone Specially Raihan. First of all welcome to our Forum Family. Wish you a inspirational thumps up to you. Your participation will be more effective for us. Be with us.


Warmly
BIDITA
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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #13 on: October 21, 2011, 11:59:04 PM »
Your writing hand is wonderful. carry on this process...........
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Re: ...Poetry...Written by Bidita
« Reply #14 on: February 07, 2012, 08:13:14 PM »
                                Seeking some orchestra
                                need some musical turn;
                                no more selective abs
                                rain drops touching
                                ma innocent heart.
                                I feel the, the dark room
                                with my sinking lonely ships!
                                Gloomy leafs turns me there, forever....
                                                                                                ----Bidita Rahman
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Bidita Rahman :)
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