Dear Umme Kulsum Madam,
The very first stanza...ends with a question but missing a punctuation(?)
The whole Second stanza is without any punctuation and i think it matters more in poetry!
And the last line, is it correct" what do you prayer?"?
I have tried to write expressions, probably i emphasis more on semantic than to make sentences. You may observe I have used a few of punctuations. Firstly, in the first stanza, i have used a comma to separate expression to expression. Then there are no punctuation till last line of the poem. A comma, a long pause, and a question mark are the three more punctuations i have put there. Again, comma for the separation, questin mark for achieving emphasis. I really appreciate your such observation, I put "..." amid "What do you ... prayer?"
Once again Thank you mam. I think yr = your.
Dear Shah Al Mamun Brother,
Nice effort indeed....
I tried to omit punctuation deliberately, bro.
Thanks for joining me here.