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...Poetry...Written by Bidita

Started by bidita, March 19, 2011, 05:32:21 PM

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March 19, 2011, 05:32:21 PM
                                     
                          Blank emotion

                                    I am blank
                                          Feel me at once
                                    I am Blank
                                          Touch me at a glance
                                    I am blank
                                          Give me heaven from the sky
                                    I am blank
                                          A little girl smiles with shy.
                                    I am blank
                                         Take me and spread your wings
                                    I am blank
                                         Go through your confidence with happy things.
                                    I am blank
                                         No one knows
                                    I am blank
                                          It just begins to you to show.....




                                                                                                                BIDITA
Bidita Rahman :)
Id: 092-11-956
23rd batch
Department of Business Administration
School of Business
Daffodil International University
latifa@diu.edu.bd

goodboy

#1
March 19, 2011, 06:16:44 PM
 :)Nicely written, Bidita Apu,

A "Blank" has its own history.And I guess you've tried to give the feelings of that history........

Really nice............!!!
Md. Abul Hossain Shajib.
101-11-1375
Department of BBA, Sec:B.
25th Batch.
Daffodil International University.
Email: shajib_1375@diu.edu.bd
Admin Executive
creative.bd

nusrat-diu

#2
March 21, 2011, 04:54:09 PM
Bidita...in one word..'wonderful'!
Nusrat Jahan
Assistant Professor
Department of English
Daffodil International University

bidita

#3
March 21, 2011, 08:17:07 PM
 Thank you Maam ..Please read those I wrote it yesterday
                   
                                  Indescribable Emotion

                                        Painless heart achieve the death soul
                                        Surviving life just reacting my dreams
                                        Remarkable movements waiting for a chance
                                        by cleaning dirty cloud around my sky..

                                        Frustration is melting in my eyes
                                        drinking happiness by one drop of darkness
                                        blowing wind just touch of my hand
                                        I just slap of my emotions crossing the fake world.

                                        My mind plays gambling with my unknown future
                                        killing sentiment for winning awhile
                                        life becomes mysteries in my shuttering mind
                                        gloomy nature could not alive for your   
                                                                               DESTRUCTIVE LOVE...


                                                                                                                       BIDITA
Bidita Rahman :)
Id: 092-11-956
23rd batch
Department of Business Administration
School of Business
Daffodil International University
latifa@diu.edu.bd

Shamim Ansary

#4
March 22, 2011, 09:31:37 AM
Well selected dictions
"Many thanks to Allah who gave us life after having given us death and (our) final return (on the Day of Qiyaamah (Judgement)) is to Him"

nusrat-diu

#5
March 22, 2011, 04:39:09 PM
Bidita,

You have a very good hand in poetry. Keep it up! We wanna see a sequel of emotion.

Best wishes.
Nusrat Jahan
Assistant Professor
Department of English
Daffodil International University

bidita

#6
March 26, 2011, 11:43:01 AM

                                         Must Happen
     
                                                     
                                                  Everyone finds there soul of death
                                                                   it is feeling full of faith
                                                   Suspense can never die with holy sky
                                                               innocent Love will win awhile
 
                                                  Slighter touch can give you freedom mind
                                                discriminatory help to send you a hidden place,
                                                                      there will your  punishment so
                                                     Ego should not work on that day
                                                   it will be only silence nothing to say .....

                                                                                                      ___BIDITA____
Bidita Rahman :)
Id: 092-11-956
23rd batch
Department of Business Administration
School of Business
Daffodil International University
latifa@diu.edu.bd

bidita

#7
March 30, 2011, 09:45:06 AM


 

                                               Blood-tie is uncertain
                                               have to maintain it thoroughly
                                               Life creates some weakness
                                               imperfection is not something false...

                                               Future will tell the destructive past
                                               irrelevant reality cannot sit calm
                                               disbelievers are shocked of your less protection
                                               sparkling emotion could not absorb fast 
           
                                               Unnecessary goals setting on mind
                                               Innocent mind reminds it awhile
                                               unemotional blind eyes calling me
                                               Where I can go to find softness mind...

                                                                                                   ___BIDITA___
Bidita Rahman :)
Id: 092-11-956
23rd batch
Department of Business Administration
School of Business
Daffodil International University
latifa@diu.edu.bd

shibli

#8
May 18, 2011, 02:53:37 PM
"Here you are.
You are, I know you.
And
Here am I,
Who you know well.
Again we dwell in form together,
And I'm beginning to Remember
As I watch you shine,
And project your wondrous magic show
Upon this place and time."

Those who worship the natural elements enter darkness (Air, Water, Fire, etc.). Those who worship sambhuti sink deeper in darkness. [Yajurveda 40:9]; Sambhuti means created things, for example table, chair, idol, etc.

saila siddika

#9
October 15, 2011, 12:25:02 AM
In DIU there are many poets. Teacher, student both. And i am proud to be a student of DIU. :D

sethy

#10
October 15, 2011, 10:40:30 AM
Wow Bidita apu. Carry on.................
Sazia Afrin Sethy
ID:101-11-1366
BBA Department,
Batch: 25th,
Sec: B.

Syed Raihan

#11
October 21, 2011, 03:30:30 PM
Its really appreciable for u Bidita.I hope in future u will be a great poet of Bangladesh whose writing reflect our life,problems,tragedy,realty,hope,..and so many real life imagery. I wish ur Great success in ur poetry writing and hope 1day ur poem can be added in my Film scene,If i can make myself as a good maker haha :D.May Allah bless us all -Ameen. :)
Syed Raihan-Ul-Islam
Id: 092-10-526
Department of English
Daffodil International University

bidita

#12
October 21, 2011, 08:31:10 PM


Thank you everyone Specially Raihan. First of all welcome to our Forum Family. Wish you a inspirational thumps up to you. Your participation will be more effective for us. Be with us.


Warmly
BIDITA
Bidita Rahman :)
Id: 092-11-956
23rd batch
Department of Business Administration
School of Business
Daffodil International University
latifa@diu.edu.bd

sethy

#13
October 21, 2011, 11:59:04 PM
Your writing hand is wonderful. carry on this process...........
Sazia Afrin Sethy
ID:101-11-1366
BBA Department,
Batch: 25th,
Sec: B.

bidita

#14
February 07, 2012, 08:13:14 PM Last Edit: February 10, 2012, 06:18:54 PM by bidita
                                Seeking some orchestra
                               need some musical turn;
                               no more selective abs
                               rain drops touching
                               ma innocent heart.
                               I feel the, the dark room
                               with my sinking lonely ships!
                               Gloomy leafs turns me there, forever....
                                                                                                ----Bidita Rahman
Bidita Rahman :)
Id: 092-11-956
23rd batch
Department of Business Administration
School of Business
Daffodil International University
latifa@diu.edu.bd
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